Tipi: June 2018

Thursday, 14 June 2018

WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.

PLANNING: You now have 5 minutes to add the keywords to your plan. Do not write any sentences in the boxes below.

Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader? Describe what the WHOLE day was about.
Who? What? Where? Pt england When? Fir
BODY: Describe what happened during the day.
Paragraph 2: Assembly (3-4 sentences)
What was special about the assembly for Matariki? Did Mr. Burt (or someone else) say something about Matariki that you felt was important or interesting?
Paragraph 3: Your Group (3-4 sentences)
What happened happened when you met with your group? Who was/were your teacher(s)? What were you going to be doing?
Paragraph 4: Your Group (3-4 sentences)
Write about what you create/made. What was the process that you went through?
Conclusion (Summary)
How did we end the day? What was your favourite part of the final assembly? What do you want to/hope to learn about? What do you think about the day overall?

Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences:

I know I have been successful writing because my recount:
1	Has an orientation to tell who, what, when, where.
2	Recounts the experience in paragraphs in the order the events happened.
3	Shares my feelings about the experience at the end.
4	Is written using verbs in the past tense (I saw, I walked, I felt).
5	Has sentences with capital letters and full stops.

Finished?

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Labels: 2018, Writing, Recount, Matariki Day, Ako 3

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