Wednesday 12 December 2018
Wednesday 5 December 2018
Friday 30 November 2018
Cave Art Animation
Hi my name is Tipi and this is my cave art animation.
In my animation the cave man is actually drawing the pictures about what happened with the dragon, tiger and the cave people.
The cave man was drawing a dragon and people were killing them. Then the people were throwing the arrow at the dragon. One person was hit by an arrow to the eye and it was bleeding .
Six arrows were hit around the body and it was bleeding. and they took the body of the dragon. then the tiger came a long to stop the people who were killing the tiger.
And then the tiger row the people fall down. Then the dragon coming by the people. Then the blood got on them.
Then 6 arrow hit the tiger the end thank you for watching you my Animation
Wednesday 21 November 2018
Term 4 Animation Voice Over
He was running to the cave. and was drawing a dragon and people were killing it. Then the people were throwing the arrow at the dragon one of the person got one arrow in the eye and it was Bleeding . and they were 6 arrow around the body and it was bleeding. and they took the body of the dragon.
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its about the dragon dies. because the arrow hit the dragon eye
its about the dragon dies. because the arrow hit the dragon eye
Tuesday 20 November 2018
Tuesday 30 October 2018
Thursday 18 October 2018
Recount scared time
Writing: last term, on Friday, We went to go to the line. and when i was by my Friend Jerry and i was so scared. but at the end i came 1st place. and i was so happy that i came 1st place and when I cross the end of the line I Thought Jerry was behind me.
Wednesday 17 October 2018
Tuesday 16 October 2018
Thursday 27 September 2018
Tuesday 25 September 2018
Thursday 20 September 2018
Thursday 13 September 2018
Tuesday 11 September 2018
Thursday 6 September 2018
Sheep Point of View
I am catching miss west. When I caught miss west i had nearly lost my breath. My baby is safe now.
Tuesday 4 September 2018
Monday 3 September 2018
Wednesday 29 August 2018
Tuesday 28 August 2018
Sheep Dictasion
The mother sheep and followed me along the path.
Picking up her paste that she realized that i was touching dissidence.Of the lamb.
Once upon time i was the sheep and i was catching miss west.when i was catching miss west i had nearly lost my breath.
Tuesday 21 August 2018
Monday 20 August 2018
Tuesday 14 August 2018
Thursday 9 August 2018
Friday 3 August 2018
ANIMATION PLAN
THIS IS MY ANIMATION PLAN THAT IS SHOWING ME PLAYING BESKETBALL THRAK FOR LOOKING. :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Thursday 2 August 2018
Tuesday 31 July 2018
Thursday 5 July 2018
Wednesday 4 July 2018
Tuesday 3 July 2018
Monday 2 July 2018
Friday 29 June 2018
Monday 18 June 2018
Thursday 14 June 2018
Matariki Day Recount
Matariki Day Recount
WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.
PLANNING: You now have 5 minutes to add the keywords to your plan. Do not write any sentences in the boxes below.
Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?
Describe what the WHOLE day was about.
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Who?
What?
Where? Pt england
When? Fir
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BODY: Describe what happened during the day.
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Paragraph 2: Assembly (3-4 sentences)
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What was special about the assembly for Matariki?
Did Mr. Burt (or someone else) say something about Matariki that you felt was important or interesting?
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Paragraph 3: Your Group (3-4 sentences)
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What happened happened when you met with your group?
Who was/were your teacher(s)?
What were you going to be doing?
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Paragraph 4: Your Group (3-4 sentences)
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Write about what you create/made. What was the process that you went through?
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Conclusion (Summary)
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How did we end the day?
What was your favourite part of the final assembly?
What do you want to/hope to learn about?
What do you think about the day overall?
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Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences:
I know I have been successful writing because my recount:
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Has an orientation to tell who, what, when, where.
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Recounts the experience in paragraphs in the order the events happened.
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Shares my feelings about the experience at the end.
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Is written using verbs in the past tense (I saw, I walked, I felt).
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Has sentences with capital letters and full stops.
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Finished?
- Get feedback from a buddy.
- Create a drawing/image or add a photo of your final project.
- Share your writing and image on your blog:
Title
Labels: 2018, Writing, Recount, Matariki Day, Ako 3
- Add the link to your blog to our class Blog Log.
This friday i was Sick because i was playing a game outside in the back
Wednesday 13 June 2018
Wednesday 6 June 2018
poisons water
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